Would not you prefer a tender love story?

"a summer love" my movie script, came back with some suggestions. "can they make love while he is blowing a bank safe? how about she gives him oral during a car chase? when they part at the end of summer, how about they are in a helicopter and it explodes over the grand canyon?"
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What more can i add sounds like my kind of movie,, nice job..your friend fro, tennessee...rob