Love poem!?
Hi, eh i had to write a "love" poem for english! can you guys tell me what you think?and if you have any suggestions for changing any lines? (i know some are dreadful!) plz do!thanks!love is…love is like a thousand butterfliesdancing on my face.love is like a daily strollnot a marathon, not a race.love is like a player’s dartalways reaching bull.love is like a new born babyso fragile, not yet full.love is when you touch my skinand send shivers down my spine.love is when you call me beautifulnot sexy, hot or fine.love is like the stars abovesparking in each eye.love is when it hurts each nightwhen we say nicebye.love is when i stand here exposedi’m open and so true.love is when i stand hereand offer my heart to you…. xx
